Poetry, Lyrics, and Essays

i like this a lot, is it a part of a longer thing?
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"Sitting on a hillside, watching all the people die
I'll feel much better on the other side"

Callouses in unexpected places. Where you rub yourself down, commonly, To sooth but it flares. Reagency marks, showers private life
That's a poem about that little mark you have under your wrist from using a computer all day and rubbing it against the edge of your desk

Obviously

idk who you are but the only throw-away part in there is the "laterally integrated" the rest of the words make sense together but whatever

That's a dumb ass useless critique. The space between "too dense" and "too trite" is a ridiculous balance and nobody reads poetry anyways so can't we just share
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Addendum: if that is difficult to understand I am saying you're probably right but also being defensive because you've got a Bad Attitude and I'm going to call the cops on you

Venom Dream posted...

idk who you are but the only throw-away part in there is the "laterally integrated" the rest of the words make sense together but whatever

That's a dumb ass useless critique. The space between "too dense" and "too trite" is a ridiculous balance and nobody reads poetry anyways so can't we just share
Poetry Lyrics and E-SPORTS

Addendum: if that is difficult to understand I am saying you're probably right but also being defensive because you've got a Bad Attitude and I'm going to call the cops on you

i go by willie on malt.

I was just f***ing with you


mostly
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