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And now, time for an Atheist Haiku

#11Hustle KongPosted 2/18/2013 12:16:10 PM
I honestly cannot decide it TC's or Suibom's "haikus" are worse and more offensive.
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Shooting Game never die.
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#12kozlo100Posted 2/18/2013 12:25:15 PM
The real problem here is that if this is the level of discourse you're shooting for, the limerick is the preferred form.
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#13SuibomPosted 2/18/2013 12:25:23 PM
Late Winter, Kong says,
"I do not like your haikus."
Now Suibom weeps.

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"Indeed these are the mere edges of His ways, and how small a whisper we hear of Him!
But the thunder of His power who can understand." - Job 24:14
#14Hustle KongPosted 2/18/2013 12:30:52 PM
There's a bit of redemption. ;p
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Shooting Game never die.
It prays that the clover of luck be always in your mind.
#15OzymandiasIVPosted 2/18/2013 12:39:59 PM
I love it when someone is called out for misrepresenting something else, ie Suibom's nonsense, and then blaming it on the people he's misrepresenting when they point out that he's misrepresenting them.
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#16SuibomPosted 2/18/2013 12:46:08 PM
Then educate me. But do it in another topic. This is for atheist haikus.

And do it quick, I'm gone for 40 days starting tomorrow.
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"Indeed these are the mere edges of His ways, and how small a whisper we hear of Him!
But the thunder of His power who can understand." - Job 24:14
#17SilviiroPosted 2/18/2013 1:30:54 PM(edited)
No, this is an atheist haiku:

I am a haiku
I do not believe in god
I am an atheist
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"I have seen everything that is done under the sun, and behold, all is vanity and a striving after wind." -- Ecclesiastes 1:14
#18hamsandwich3141Posted 2/18/2013 2:59:52 PM
Hustle Kong posted...
I dislike enough when "haiku" is made completely meaningless by stringing a bunch together to tell some larger story. The brevity is pretty much the main point.


Though I agree with your sentiment, I'm pretty sure haiku (or very similar styles of poems) were originally strung together to make a longer poem.

Also, writing a haiku only for the syllable count and not using the kind of language usually associated with them really seems to grind my gears, like when limericks have terrible cadence.
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#19Hustle KongPosted 2/18/2013 3:46:39 PM
Really? I haven't seen a whole lot of that, at any rate.

Also, writing a haiku only for the syllable count and not using the kind of language usually associated with them really seems to grind my gears, like when limericks have terrible cadence.


Indeed. It seems when people try to bend art to get a message across, terribleness is usually the result.
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Shooting Game never die.
It prays that the clover of luck be always in your mind.
#20WelshGamer82Posted 2/18/2013 4:17:44 PM
From: Silviiro | Posted: 2/18/2013 8:30:54 PM | #017
I am a haiku
I do not believe in god
I am an atheist


Your last line is 6 syllables, is it not?
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