ITT: I fix the story

#1FireMage7777Posted 3/17/2013 5:21:34 AM
Every now and again I'll post here and fix various issues with the story to actually make DmC have a story that doesn't suck

First off, one if the most glaring issues in the game. The Hellgate

With the way things are now the ending basically has a horde of demons in the human world, to kill and destroy as they please with the only thing capable of killing them being Donte. Let's fix this by changing a few things concerning Mondis and the Hellgate

First off the Hellgate and Mondis are not connected, on top of that the Hellgate would allow a massive army of demons to invade the human world, completely conquering it under Mondis. However it takes time to open which is why Mondis does what he does. The whole rule the world through debt is a pisspoor premise and can simply be changed to making humans complacent while waiting for the Hellgate to open

Now Limbo. Yes it still exists, but its like a mini Hellgate that Mondis can put people that oppose him into the demon realm

Done, now Mondis can die and demons don't swarm the world

Any requests on the next topic I tackle?
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#2syctheweilderPosted 3/17/2013 7:41:04 AM
inb4 the pitfful fleshy citizens of limbo can fight the demons
#3SiLVeR_420Posted 3/17/2013 10:21:53 AM
syctheweilder posted...
inb4 the pitfful fleshy citizens of limbo can fight the demons


Could have just said inb4japanesejade
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#4Green_PuffPosted 3/17/2013 10:23:03 AM
Firemage be thinking too much into this, yo.
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#5caffiend7Posted 3/17/2013 10:38:36 AM
Wow you just made a better story in a few minutes than NT, who at most had maybe a year to make a stupid story.
#6Green_PuffPosted 3/17/2013 10:45:14 AM
Hack nd slash game = good story?
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#7KA_ME_HA_ME_HAPosted 3/17/2013 10:51:45 AM
Green_Puff posted...
Hack nd slash game = good story?

NT's entire purpose, literally the most important reason for their being hired was to deliver a good story, and they couldn't even do that.
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#8produnerPosted 3/17/2013 11:24:07 AM
Green_Puff posted...
Hack nd slash game = good story?


The game tried to change that and failed at both, story and gameplay. If DMC4's story was tweaked, by giving more emphasis on corruption, demon artifacts and gave Dante a larger role, that would have changed something in the genre.

P.S it seems like devs were afraid of giving Dante a complex personality. Well alexxshadenk777.
#9SilentS89Posted 3/17/2013 11:38:27 AM
Well done Firemage, next topic: Fix the demonic orphanage.
#10produnerPosted 3/17/2013 11:48:55 AM
Next topic is Characterization , since it is weak in this game . Most characters don't have distinct personalities that have been built around their pasts.

Most iconic characters and great villains in stories have certain lines, view points, ego, past experience, certain outfits and a certain pattern of actions/speech.

Mundus and Bob are fine , but not that great. Donte , Vorgil and Kat are extremely weak in that department.