Hello, as some of you may know I am writing a small fan fiction based around my Nuzlocke challenge. Well here is chapter 2 for your enjoyment.
It's a slow starter as to build up the story but I promise it'll pick up in pace and be worth it. ;)
Let me know what you think. Enjoy! --- B2 FC: 4213 2931 0485
#2DaveyBouge(Topic Creator)Posted 2/10/2013 2:12:28 AM
Bump for those who haven't read. --- B2 FC: 4213 2931 0485
#3xfyrenxPosted 2/10/2013 2:22:43 AM
Does Piplup actually start with Bubble? And where the hell are the authorities? Surely that monster disguised as the pokemon professor should have been arrested, or killed, ages ago. --- "Eat all your school, stay in milk, drink your teeth, don't do sleep and get eight hours of drug." Mr.T
#4DaveyBouge(Topic Creator)Posted 2/10/2013 2:39:18 AM
Ha. Well no, piplup doesn't start with bubble but I took a bit of artistic licence with that. Won't do that again if it annoys people. Also to answer the prof question he was been traveling for a long time and his true purpose is only beginning to surface. Hope that helps. :).
Does this sound like something you'd like to read more of? --- B2 FC: 4213 2931 0485
#5xfyrenxPosted 2/10/2013 2:48:43 AM
Yes, if only to see where it goes. I'd say to keep with what's possible in game, though, but maybe others want to see the story go more like the anime. --- [[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[ |||||||||||||||||||||||||||| ]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]
#6DaveyBouge(Topic Creator)Posted 2/10/2013 2:55:25 AM
Cool. Thanks for the input, I appreciate it. Glad it's interesting enough for you to follow it further. ;) --- B2 FC: 4213 2931 0485
#7DaveyBouge(Topic Creator)Posted 2/10/2013 11:12:51 AM