Any suggestions besides just pointing out the bad points?
Pointing out bad parts technically is a suggestion. You don't give Dnite LOrb because of Multiscale. You want him to be at full HP as much as possible. Why the hell would you inhibit you own ability? Goddamn.
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Why do you have Sheer Force on Landorus when none of the moves benefit from it? Use Sand Force at least, I know this is a Rain team but you'll like the extra power for Earthquake and Stone Edge when fighting sand teams