Any suggestions besides just pointing out the bad points?
Pointing out bad parts technically is a suggestion. You don't give Dnite LOrb because of Multiscale. You want him to be at full HP as much as possible. Why the hell would you inhibit you own ability? Goddamn. --- I'm told I look a lot like Rory Macdonald - http://i46.tinypic.com/2eyf5sy.jpg Set to WARNED status for being a Republican on 11/08/2012
Why do you have Sheer Force on Landorus when none of the moves benefit from it? Use Sand Force at least, I know this is a Rain team but you'll like the extra power for Earthquake and Stone Edge when fighting sand teams --- I love the new york knicks <3