I Want your Opinions, Do I suck?

#1machameloPosted 2/9/2013 10:12:14 PM
Hey y'all

So I just want your "HONEST" opinion does my commentary suck? :S
How can I improve myself, I know I say ahhh,ugh quite a bit I'll try and stop that but aside from that I want some tips.

I want to be a better speaker, as in real life I tend to do presentations with this tone of voice and style and I know I can do better.

Well here it Is, if it isn't to much trouble I could use some help
If you have something nice to say, You could make my day :D

THANKS

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-20yafUxrts
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#2cheese_game619Posted 2/10/2013 12:40:13 AM
im gonna be your savior and guiding light just let me watch this s*** first
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#3cheese_game619Posted 2/10/2013 12:42:34 AM
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#4cheese_game619Posted 2/10/2013 12:48:03 AM
change your name no one is going to follow squeamzzz
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#5cheese_game619Posted 2/10/2013 12:48:31 AM
you need more catch phrases and fancy swipes
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#6cheese_game619Posted 2/10/2013 12:54:26 AM
peace out is a lame finish

dont be lame next time
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#7dj_emzPosted 2/10/2013 8:35:56 AM
I highly recommend getting a better mic to help you sound clearer.
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