*cough* Orphanage Scene *cough* *cough* NORG *cough* *cough* Ultimecia's motivation *cough* *cough* Ultimecia ignoring Ellone when she's right there while possessing Rinoa *cough* *cough* Seifer magically being able to activate the Lunatic Pandora underwater *cough* *cough* the Ragnarok Deus Ex Machina *cough*
"Dyin' is easy. It's the livin' that's hard..." Grim Reaper, Maximo vs. The Army of Zin
Can we hear your rewritten script? To kill time and boredom?
Ok, I initially wanted to say "no", because I'm not good at making up stuff, but let's try for the lulz:
1. Change NORG and make him more relevant. For that matter, try to do that with the rest of the cast that isn't Squall, Rinoa and Laguna.
2. Completely abolish the Ragnarok scene and everything space and time related, or if it has to stay, at least try to make it more coherent.
3. Squall and Rinoa's romance be less out-of-nowhere. Everyone knows that they get together, but the game has poor execution in that regard.
We know his feelings and that he's basically denying it for a good portion of the game, but it needed better build-up and not just be "she's in danger, now it's time to show how I feel".
Also, let's rewrite the Mission so that the party wins and now has to investigate the conflict while peacekeeping the land. The reasons for failing it originally existed to merely extend the story's length.
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