Ill Subscribe, i love LP's. But yea i agree with Death, to get rid of your pop ups. Also you dont have to explain everything thats going on on screen, and try to be pretty quiet during cutscenes/conversations. (You can make comments in between lines and stuff like that) But, at least for me, (not sure about everyone) i watch LP's to experience stories of games i have no intention on playing, and still have a generally enjoyable commentary to go with it.
But keep it up. You have no idea how bad some of my Favorite LPers where when they started and they keep getting better. (Not sayng your bad, lol, in fact you are better then PewdiePie on his best day... my god that dudes annoying) But if you want a good example of an LPer that get better all the time ill link you to my Fav LPer.
His name is Phalll and ironically he also did a Walking dead LP. But the Walking dead LP of his was decently weak as compared to his Silent Hill Downpour LP (Which is his best yet IMO) also his Fatal Frame LPs are pretty good as well.
Also as far as Horror games go "Blind" LP's are awesome and much more entertaining, only issue is it would cause you to do alot of editing in post, cause no one wants to watch you fart around on a puzzle for half an hour. lol