Final forms have potential. Middle form of Chespin is almost identical to Chespin itself. The other middle forms are standard faire, neither good nor bad. I'd recommend using these ideas to do each line individually. Give yourself more room and play around with other feedback you get here.
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Though, next time you post a DeviantART link, leave out the post codes. DeviantART links should only include everything before the question mark when being posted to other sites. The question mark and everything after it are usually modifiers that are only relevant to you when logged in.
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