I'm making a Dragon Quest IX comic. (No spoilers yet)

#1replay104Posted 7/25/2010 11:14:14 PM
Here's panel 1

Based off of this alone what do you think?

Are you interested? It would update maybe once a week but I'd like the comic to span the entire game.
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#2replay104(Topic Creator)Posted 7/25/2010 11:14:31 PM
http://i32.tinypic.com/206lnx4.jpg

Panel 1
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#3betafalxPosted 7/25/2010 11:18:22 PM
hey hey i support you!
hope youll complete all the chapters with hilarious scenes!
#4BladenytePosted 7/25/2010 11:20:15 PM
did you make that with mspaint?

i think i'll pass
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#5replay104(Topic Creator)Posted 7/25/2010 11:21:33 PM

From: betafalx | #003
hey hey i support you!
hope youll complete all the chapters with hilarious scenes!


Thanks, it means a lot to have supporters.

I'll be working on the prologue chapter all week. It won't be too hilarious. It'll just detail up until after the title sequence (if you've played the game you'll know what I mean, the part with the huge "DRAGON QUEST IX")
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#6mnkboy907Posted 7/25/2010 11:22:22 PM
The art works well enough, but the speech bubble looks horrible.
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#7replay104(Topic Creator)Posted 7/25/2010 11:22:23 PM

From: BladerNyte | #004
did you make that with mspaint?

i think i'll pass


You're a bad troll and you should feel bad for it.
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#8replay104(Topic Creator)Posted 7/25/2010 11:22:46 PM

From: mnkboy907 | #006
The art works well enough, but the speech bubble looks horrible.


That's because it's a thought bubble. What would you recommend I do to make it better?
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#9replay104(Topic Creator)Posted 7/25/2010 11:24:51 PM
So does anyone have any suggestions?

Legit ones?
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#10betafalxPosted 7/25/2010 11:27:48 PM
ill give you some ideas

include stella after the hero falls and im sure most people will be curious about it and see it.
party tricks until the church in stornway - do damn funny ones.
or mayb you will want to follow the whole story exactly or make a few changes.
this comic will be a success if you have some funny scenes. like the persona 4 comic.
lol
GOOD LUCK