I was but one in the swarm that admire you.
That was beautiful but my heart belongs to another, Suffer.
8/101 point off for From: Suffer_Not | #001I was but one in the swarm that admire you.not 100% sure but I think that admires should be pluralized. If you can prove that the singular is fine (despite awkward sounding) I will perhaps rescind this deduction.1 point off for using "scarcely" twice without it being in a repitition manner.
Barrenite posted...That was beautiful but my heart belongs to another, Suffer.Give the man some goddam sideboob. He's earned it.I'm tearing up over here. Need some tissues up in this s***.
this is starting to get weird....
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