A poem I wrote for Barrenite inspired by her favorite champion, Elise.

#1Suffer_NotPosted 1/7/2013 2:57:41 PM(edited)
When you first met me, you scarcely noticed me.
I was but one in the swarm that admires you.
You'd injected me with love, infected me with hope,
A toxin, a curse, and inspiration so true.

These feelings inside me skitter in a frenzy,
I can hardly contain them.
You've given me emotions so volatile,
worth more to me than any gem.

You've got me wrapped around your finger,
I'm simply positively smitten,
Some say your beauty is dangerous,
But I can only dream of being bitten.

I know you'll never look at me.
It'd be smart for me to say 'farewell'.
I can only watch with wistful eyes,
As you vanish with your Rappel.
#2bobguydude1Posted 1/7/2013 2:51:35 PM
this is starting to get weird....
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#3LaqOfInterestPosted 1/7/2013 2:51:52 PM
11/11
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#4BarrenitePosted 1/7/2013 2:52:08 PM
That was beautiful but my heart belongs to another, Suffer.
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#5BlocktopusPosted 1/7/2013 2:52:58 PM
what da heyl
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#6g-cube_mastaPosted 1/7/2013 2:55:51 PM
8/10

1 point off for

From: Suffer_Not | #001
I was but one in the swarm that admire you.


not 100% sure but I think that admires should be pluralized. If you can prove that the singular is fine (despite awkward sounding) I will perhaps rescind this deduction.

1 point off for using "scarcely" twice without it being in a repitition manner.
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#7UncleAssMuffPosted 1/7/2013 2:56:12 PM
Barrenite posted...
That was beautiful but my heart belongs to another, Suffer.


Give the man some goddam sideboob. He's earned it.

I'm tearing up over here. Need some tissues up in this s***.
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#8LaqOfInterestPosted 1/7/2013 2:59:28 PM
g-cube_masta posted...
8/10

1 point off for

From: Suffer_Not | #001
I was but one in the swarm that admire you.


not 100% sure but I think that admires should be pluralized. If you can prove that the singular is fine (despite awkward sounding) I will perhaps rescind this deduction.

1 point off for using "scarcely" twice without it being in a repitition manner.

I think "swarm" can go either way considering "swarm of spiders" is implied, and "swarm of spiders that admire you" works.
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#9Suffer_Not(Topic Creator)Posted 1/7/2013 3:00:01 PM
From: Barrenite | #004
That was beautiful but my heart belongs to another, Suffer.

:<

From: g-cube_masta | #006
8/10

1 point off for

From: Suffer_Not | #001
I was but one in the swarm that admire you.


not 100% sure but I think that admires should be pluralized. If you can prove that the singular is fine (despite awkward sounding) I will perhaps rescind this deduction.

1 point off for using "scarcely" twice without it being in a repitition manner.

I don't know what you're talking about >__>''

From: UncleAssMuff | #007
Barrenite posted...
That was beautiful but my heart belongs to another, Suffer.


Give the man some goddam sideboob. He's earned it.

I'm tearing up over here. Need some tissues up in this s***.

It's okay. I knew this was the logical conclusion. But my heart refused to listen to reason, and so I resigned myself to heartbreak so long as the tiniest shred of hope existed.
#10SirDanieIPosted 1/7/2013 3:07:54 PM
bobguydude1 posted...
this is starting to get weird....

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