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Tsubaki, she was getting very annoying. Carrie clenched her fists and pushed Mitsuki aside. “Carrie,” muttered Mitsuki. “I had it enough with you Tsubaki!” Carrie roared. Tsubaki held her knife tightly in both hands and pointed it at Carrie. “If you are with them, then I hate you too!” Tsubaki closed her eyes and screamed loudly as she charged towards Carrie. Carrie easily dodged Tsubaki’s knife swings and landed a single punch to her nose. With a loud crack, Tsubaki lost her balance and landed hard on the ground, groaning in pain.
Carrie felt a powerful presence and heard the flapping of wings behind her. Feng landed with grace, her arms crossed and her facial expression serious. Seems like the owner heard about the fighting.
“All right, what is going on here?” she demanded. Feng looked at the injured Tsubaki on the ground, the raging Mitsuki, and Carrie who was covered slightly in Tsubaki’s blood. “This place can only function because of its neutrality. I will not tolerate any fighting here. Those that violate that rule will feel my wraith. Tell me who started this. If no one says anything, then I’ll assume you are all guilty and I will punish you all!”
Feng looks fairly mad, so maybe I should say something, thought Carrie.
A. Blame Tsubaki for starting it B. Feign ignorance and say nothing. C. Attack Feng. That chicken sure looks quite tasty. D. Free choice
Another random thought. I noticed some CYOAs have a pastebin with a character data sheet. Obviously I haven't done one, but how useful is one going to be? At the start i didn't think I needed one, but given the length of the story (30k words and counting) maybe I should have one since subtle details I have given for characters may have been forgotten over the length of the story. I can see one being useful for a stat heavy Munchkin style CYOA, but that wasn't something I was aiming for.
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