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Put some wood logs around the edges to give it some detail. Right now it looks a bit like a plain wooden box. Maybe add some pillars and such out of logs as well to give it depth. Good job for a first project.
I'm just going to list things as I watch the video.
1. Hide the redstone underground 2. Add some variation to the outside structure. All wood doesn't look as bad as all cobble imo, but still, variation is nice. :) 3. Maybe make your staircases a little wider. 4. As you find it, maybe make a colored wool rug or carpet for the first floor. 5. Maybe put the torches on top of the bookshelves, rather than on their sides.
Other than those little things, I think it looks pretty good.